The pitch

An area where I think I could give more detail on would have to be the conventions. I think I could of given more detail to how I was going to be creative how I was going to use them. 

Another area where I feel I could put more detail in would have to my idea. I chose my idea because I explained very briefly how I was going to be creative. Not so much on how I was going to be realistic. 

Visual styles is another area where I could've given more detail in as I don't think I explained enough why I actulley chose those styles. 

I feel like I could of explained the Target Audience a bit better because I didn't explain why it was going to appeal to this specific age or why it was going to be both genders etc... so thats why I feel I could've explained it a bit better.

I feel I could gone more in depth with the location area because I explained why I was going to use them to make the video look unique.

I feel that a strength that my audience gathered was when I answered the reason why I was using varied camera language. 

I was trying to make it look diverse and unique and make it look excited, Also were I was talking about the colour schemes and how white signifies purity and the black signifies the darkness. 

I feel that a flaw that my audience saw was the fact that I didn't have a solid idea of how the music video is going to look like. 

Another flaw was how I was going to use amplifying in my music video as well I think they saw that I didn't put enough thought into the conventions that I had actulley chosen. 

Also I the audience spotted that I didn't really know how I was going to make it look like a completely different music video. 

One where the audience for sure pick out a weakness was on the artist section because I didn't know who was going to be in my music video as the actor and I feel that really a downfall for me because I should have know who my actor was going to be. So that being show it didn't look like my music video idea was very practical.  

Another thing was the structure of my music video I don't think I went in depth with my actual story.

The things I would change would have to be a strong solid idea and also I would need to add more creativity to my idea also I will explain my conventions in the actual music video. I will also make my music video look as creative as possible. I will the cutting to the beat is precise and also I will make sure the varied camera angles are diverse as well.